Vector Graphic Backing Paper Design

It's relevant to mention that I seen some work I liked on Behance that I like, and tried to apply a similar effect to some work of my own. Here is a backing paper design that uses vector artwork from Illustrator, I'll be honest I'm not too pleased with how it's turned out, it doesn't look as good as I thought. Probably because of the quality of dissected sections, or perhaps the effect just looked good in the media (Typography) for a reason.

Below is a link to the blog post I did regarding the work I seen on Behance:

http://d-bell1316-dc.blogspot.co.uk/2013/11/displaced-by-ion.html